Throughout the construction of my music video and ancillary task peer and teacher feedback forms were filled out to help me improve the quality of my media product.
This is not nearly enough. You need much more explanation of how the target audience (not just peer group) fed back to you about your products. What did you change because of the feedback. Examples of this too.
Youtube videos of comments on your video. Screengrabs of Facebook comments, screengrabs of Youtube comments etc.
This is not nearly enough. You need much more explanation of how the target audience (not just peer group) fed back to you about your products. What did you change because of the feedback. Examples of this too.
ReplyDeleteYoutube videos of comments on your video. Screengrabs of Facebook comments, screengrabs of Youtube comments etc.